The Literal Hook Problem
"Your opening needs a hook."
Added hook.
"Not a literal— why is chapter one entirely about fishing?"
"You said hook."
"Metaphorical hook."
"Page two is about metaphors. Also fishing metaphors."
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"Your opening needs a hook."
Added hook.
"Not a literal— why is chapter one entirely about fishing?"
"You said hook."
"Metaphorical hook."
"Page two is about metaphors. Also fishing metaphors."
"Your character arc is flat."
"He's a pancake."
"Metaphorically?"
"Literally. Chapter 4. Witch."
"Your opening needs a hook." Added hook. "Not a literal— why is chapter one entirely about fishing?" "You said hook." "Metaphorical hook." "Page two is about metaphors. Also fishing metaphors."
"Your character arc is flat." "He's a pancake." "Metaphorically?" "Literally. Chapter 4. Witch."
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